His long, flowing hair blew in the breeze
He always ate bagels with cream cheese
He had a hairy chest
He always looked his best
He’s Mr. Devlin, or Mr. D
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- “Man lowers his head and lunges into civilization, forgetting the days of his infancy when he sought truth in a snowflake or a stick. Man forgets the wisdom of the child.” - Jack Kerouac (1922 - 1969)
6 comments:
Well Rachel this poem is a great perspective of what mr. devlin was like. You really painted a picture of him in my head. You used a good word choice in your poem. You match the poem to person nicely
Richy
I dont know who Mr. Devlin is, but I can see how you thought of him. Its a little strange the description's of Mr. Devlin that you chose to incorparate in your poem. I think that the type of poem this is a limerick, but D doesnt rhmye with breeze or cheese so I was a little confused. On the positive note, I liked how you made this poem humorous. And I thought it was funny.
breeze cheese and D totally rhyme, wylee.
RACHIE! This poem is soooooo funny. No My god! Allllyyyyy. I love how you expressed your obsession towards Mistuh Devlin in this romantical poemmmm. It makes me all warm and fuzzy, like the chewbacca picco you gave himmm. Makes me wanna build a time machineeee ;). I can just see his hair blowing in the wind, with his girly sweater, 'eating his breakfast!' I like the rhyming, but like Jennnnifurrrr said, D and cheese doesn't rhymmmme. So yeah? This poem is oringinalll. I'd marry this poem if it were legallllll. Oh my god! Phil and Peppppppper.=]=]=]=]
I liked in this poem how you potrayed devlin. Instead of choosing personality traits, you took the best of his character that makes everyone smile. I would have liked it better if you said something about his boston accent though.
Effectively, this poem makes you remember rather than picture in my opinion. You gave a good sense of him and potrayed him phsyically doing those actions.
Well done
Rache Like This,
This poem makes me lauh so hard everytime I read it. I love it. I know you liked him a lot and this poem proves your point, although I dont like him. I like how it was funny. I also liked you it flowed. GREATT!
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