The cat sat on the porch
While listening to the birds
He picked up his torch
He used many words
The cat jumped off the rail
While thinking about fish
He ran from the house trying to bail
Hoping for his wish
The cat chased the mouse
He tripped and fell on the ground
While he chewed on his owners blouse
He had to stomp and pound
The cat breaks his hand
And then he becomes a man
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Hahaha!
Parker, your poetry vocabulary is exquisite! your poem made melaugh alot because poetry by you is like arts and craft by a plumer...its priceless! but i liked it nevertheless and i want a copy of itttt!!!
Much looooovveeeee!!!!!
Miccc Boyerrrr
Your poem is good because your vocabluay is extraordinary. As
I read it, I imagine the scene with a cat and it makes me laugh. Your poem has the best rhyme that
I have ever seen and the rhyme was superb. After reading it,I felt it was funny because it had rhyming and creative. This reminds me of when I saw a movie and reminded me when the cat was chasing a mouse. Overall,good job on your poem.
As I read this poem,I thought about how random the choice of words actually were. The rhyming is good, but it seems like when you found any word that rhymed with the word you needed, you automatically found a way to toss it in whether or not it made sense. This came to me as comical, not jsut laziness. The imagery in this poem was very well done, as i pictured this cat who always had something to do. After reading this poem, I basically felt the same as before, eccept it almost made me dislike cats even more. This was a result of the odd things the cat did. The random but seemingly funny choice of words reminded me of a doc souc poem. well done pk
He breaks his hand and becomes a man?
Oh parker. You never cease to amaze me with your vocabulabulary.
"hi"
This poem makes me giggle. actually, i dont really understand some of it, because, well, the cat breaks his hand, which doesnt make sense, because cats dont have hands.
DUHHH.
good job parker. i think you should enter this somewhere and be famous forever.
Parker this is a good poem. Some of the parts I don't understand but it was still nicely written and the rhyme scheme is very nice. This is probably one of the funniest poems on the site. Nice work!
wow pk this is a very good poem but i didnt think u hade a passion for cats. I liked how you rhymed the words in this poem and it was written well. You used a lot of good vocabulary which made your poem even better.
Richy
Good job Parker I think this is a good and funny poem. I thought one of the reasons that it was good was because you really gave the cat a lot of elements. Not only did he have a hand, but he picked up a torch. I will say that I think it was pretty cool to envision a cat with a torch chasing a mouse thinking about a fish then breaking his hand and turning into a man.......Or something like that. By the way what is that part about chewing on a blouse...Its so random. Good job.
parker your a beastly poet. but how does a cat break its hand and become a man. ha, nice though.
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