Monday, March 5, 2007

By Connie F.

The Old Man and the Sea by Ernest Hemingway is one of those books that have more than one central idea. It contains many messages it tries to get across through the main character, an old man named Santiago. Themes of courage, pride, and defeat are woven throughout the novella. However, the theme from the novella that I thought was strongest was that man can be destroyed but not defeated. In other words, a person can be ruined or spoiled, but not beaten. Examples of this occur in the very beginning, when the sharks devour the marlin, and when the man comes home at the end.

This theme is introduced at the very beginning of The Old Man and the Sea. In the very first sentence of the book Hemingway tells us “[Santiago] had gone eighty-four days now without taking a fish” (9). This allows us to infer that his luck has been ruined. We are further assured of this fact when we are told, “many made fun of the old man…others, of the older fishermen, looked at him and were sad” (11). Many men would be extremely discouraged by this and would just give up hope altogether. They wouldn’t even try to fish any longer. However, Santiago will not accept the fact that he has been destroyed and is determined to continue trying to make a catch. ‘The boy’ who encourages him to believe in himself and continue fishing also helps him along. Because Santiago continues fishing he is not defeated; he still loves to fish and has a passion. He has not been beaten.

Another example of this theme is when the sharks begin to eat his great marlin. In fact, this is the part of the story when the theme is quoted. The sharks slowly steal the profit of Santiago’s suffering with each bite they take out of the marlin. They spoiled Santiago’s three days and endless effort put into catching the fish. Yet, he continues home and busies himself with thoughts of baseball. He refuses to stop, and always looks on the bright side of things. Indeed he convinces himself that at least “she’s [the fish] much lighter now” (111). He’s not defeated; he musters up the courage and determination to return home. His determination and courage keeps him from being beaten or conquered.

Upon arriving home the harsh reality of daylight reveals the fact that nothing of the fish is left except the head, the tail, and the spine. The loss of his fish destroys the old man; all the effort he’s put into the fish is worthless. The great marlin that was such a catch had been completely demolished by the sharks and was not fit to be eaten or sold. At this point the old man loses all hope. He would have been defeated, but upon arriving home he is consoled by the boy, who still has faith in him: “He didn’t beat you, not the fish” (125), the boy says. Because a person still looks up to him he cannot truly have been defeated. He still has a purpose and a will to live.

This theme can easily tie into any life. You may seem destroyed in the eyes of some, but you will never be defeated unless you feel so. The many messages of the book all tie into the main theme; man can be destroyed but not defeated. This is demonstrated by the example at the beginning of the book, when the sharks eat the fish, and when the man returns home. We know pride can be slashed and courage can waiver, but defeat will never come if there is still a tiny spark of hope or will to continue living and fighting.

13 comments:

Anonymous said...

Great essay Connie! Your thesis was clearly stated. It was engaging and led into the rest of your essay nicely. My favorite quote was your first quote because it showed clearly that that the man is unlucky and looked down upon. The best thing about your essay was how you altered your quotations so they would flow nicely into your examples. They supported your essay very well, and it was easy to understand what the quotations were saying. Nice job!

Anonymous said...

Your thesis was stated very clearly, and I immediately knew what the essay would be about. I liked the quote you picked from page 125 because it was simple and backed up your theme well. You did a great job with you quotes and changing them with brackets. Your conclusion was great, I loved your statement that people cannot be defeated unless they allow defeat to come upon themselves. The only suggestion I have is to improve your introduction. I don't really know why, it just seemed a little awkward, but it's probably perfect.
Great essay!

Anonymous said...

I enjoyed your essay connie. The thesis was clearly stated in the first paragraph and I could determine what the essay was going to be about. Of all your examples, I thought that the quotation on page 111 about the fish being lighter, really complimented the thesis statement. It shows that the old man was always looking at the glass half full. The fish had little value anymore but it made for a lighter load. I liked that your paragraphs were organized, your examples were understandable and to the point. I think your essay could be improved by more word choice, but overall excellent job!!!

Anonymous said...

1) Well developed thesis, clearly showing what theme you were trying to explain.
2) The quote, “He didn’t beat you, not the fish” (125), was my favorite because it shows Santiago truly listens to the boy and actually takes strength from him in times of great need.
3) This essay is more clear than any others I have read. It tells us there are many themes to the story and they all have tremendous importance.
4) My advice is only to continue writing and keep your future essays as clear and easily understood as this one.

Anonymous said...

Whoa. This is an incredible essay, it is extremely well written. You were clear in all your points yet descriptive and interesting. My favorite quote was “He didn’t beat you, not the fish” because it completely ties into your theme and it makes me smile somehow. Your writing style is so intriguing that I was excited to read the next paragraph rather than dreading another essay. My small piece of advice is to maybe summaries the book a bit next time so someone who never read it could get a better view. Other wise BRAVO!!

Anonymous said...

Your essay was very good. The quotes fit very well with the story and it all tied along nicely. I think you fitted the quotes in the right spots. You also supported them very nicely.
I like the quote that was on page 111 because it showed that Santiago was very optimistic and it went along nicely with your thesis.
So far this is my favorite essay. Good job!

Anonymous said...

I really like your essay. It was well written and your thesis statement was clearly stated. I really like the first paragrph where you wrote, "Themes of courage, pride, and defeat are woven throughout the novella." You played with words and made the essay interesting. It really made me want to read more. You clearly explained the theme of the book. You did a great job.

Anonymous said...

Oooh Connie..lotsa comments :]

Your thesis was clearly stated. My favorite quote was the one in your third body paragraph, because it shows that Manolin has a lot of faith in Santiago, and want him to stay optimistic. I liked the flow of your essay. The only thing I can think of to change or whatever is the first paragraph; I'm not sure what though.

Anonymous said...

connie, great essay like always. i really like how in your conclusion you connected your thesis statement to real life. becuase it is true what you have said and i dont think a lot of people realized that from the book

Anonymous said...

Well constructed, Connie.
Your thesis of how a man is destroyed but never beaten is clear in your introductory paragraph. It is also focused throughout the story and it is pretty intriguing. Your thesis causes the reader to cast a double-take on the words, and makes them read further.

As for the quote, I guess I favor,
"well the fish is lighter now."
It shows how Santiago is being optimistic about his travel and that he will not be defeated. It kind of made me laugh when I read it.

The best thing for this essay is the organization. It is perfectly arranged to make an engaging read.
Psychological manipulation in the sense of getting a reader to want to read the essay, is very hard. You have done that quite well.

As for criticism, I would crack open a thesaurus occasionally. That is not to say you're essay was lacking in flavor, but I think you have the potential to do better with word choice.

Anonymous said...

I like your essay Connie! I liked the the thesis (a man can be destroyed but not beaten) and you clearly state it. My favorite quote is the one on page 125. It backs up your thesis, and makes you think a little. I like your beggining paragraph because its strong, and engaging. I espically like this sentece "Themes of courage, pride, and defeat are woven throughout the novella". The only thing that could inprove is the word choice. I feel that you could have used a little more "enticing" words. More suffisticating words that make it more wow. Other thna that it was great!

Anonymous said...

Connie great paper as always!!! You really have a unique talent for writing and it shows in all you put forth! I really enjoyed how you connected your ideas to real ife and use of quotes to back up your theme.
That was one of the hardest books to read for me as a freshman at SHHS way back int he 80's!
Keep up the great work!!! I love to read what you write!
Dawn, Kieran's Mom

Anonymous said...

Connie,
Your thesis was clear. My favorite quote was the one in your third body paragraph, because it shows that Manolin has a lot of faith in Santiago, and wanted him to stay optimistic. I liked how your essay rolled.